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Flame

 

 

I the flame is burning brightly into the night,
the fires of hell is consuming the heart I hold
the meaning of this world is far to poor.

I the flame is encountering

the deep seas of Heaven, to gain the crown of hope

so i can to put an end to all that is evil.

 

 

 

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  • Sock
    May 3, 2008
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    Very picturesque. a good write, and a job well done.

    Good job and good luck

    Sock