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Hope and safety

You saved me from him;
that him I dare not say.
For my new found hope (you),
shouldn't hear his name either.
For my heart was shattered;
from that him...
only to be rescued...
by my knight in shining armor...
You saved me from him.

A contest entry

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  • Kooks
    May 1, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry. Short and sweet and directly to the point. I also liked the ambiguity of the poem.

    Good luck in the contest


  • oh no its britt
    April 30, 2008
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    good poem i like it. awesome write