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Invitor { Gold }

Missing image

Eyes of burnished amber,

enticing a beckoning grin,

Fast reaching,

my invitor

 

Lay on sheets of cool cotton,

Virginal white,

as we were to each other,

my invitor.

 

I take your hand,

Slide beside your naked frame,

Unbutton to sexy underwear,

my invitor.

 

Lips of silk caress,

Guides his muscle pumped arms,

Around my tiny waist,

my invitor.

 

Soon our sexual union,

ignited sensual frames,

Night long love maker,

my invitor .

 


 

 

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Comments

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  • Bungalow Bill
    June 4

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    Don't think much of the photo, obviously

    But the poem has good flow, very sexy....and sensual


  • Abe 1
    June 3

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    haha ace !
    well done on de gold
    abe


  • GreenHrtPaleMoon gold member
    May 16

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    Oh la la...c'est magnifique! Qui m'invitera? Hahahah. Absolutely gorgeous and pretty damned HAWT, if I do say so myself. The repetition was perfect and the phrasing incredibly sensual. Now if you could just get your inviter to come over to my place...

  • Bob Fox
    May 4

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    Actually

    This a kinda soft compared to some others I have read on here. But then again when 50 & 60 yr old women are promising younger guys great blow jobs I guess anything is soft lol


  • In Too Deep1 gold member
    May 4
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    Great penning and well worthy of gold. Your pen is amazing. Congrats my friend

  • judyjudyjudy
    May 2
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    That's some sexy virgin. I enjoyed this write.
    jjj


  • GentleGiant
    May 1
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    brb off to the bathroom


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 1

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    Oh lordy!!! I want an invitor like that!!

    Wow... very sexy and sensual hun!
    *fans self* lol


  • Abe 1
    May 1
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    hot as effin hell
    wowza yes please ! you not him lol
    kinda beautiful luv the virginal bit yup
    gd luck 2 ya
    abe

  • LadyDementia gold member
    May 1

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    WOW! Very hot and steamy!! A beautifully penned piece hun, think you got this one in the bag (or bed..lol) Best of luck


  • maralisa gold member
    April 30

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    Lip of silk caress,
    Guides his muscle pumped arms,
    Around my tiny waist,
    my invitor.

    Soon our sexual union,
    ignited sensual frames,
    Night long love maker,
    my invitor .
    julie that was brillantly hot hot good luck in the contest xx marina


  • Carolina Moon silver member
    April 30

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    woo hooo and hot damn Quick!! someone grab the fire extinguisher


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      May 4
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      Thank you for the Gold
      He is one hot stud
      Loved writing for this contest
      Julie xx
  • Nighttime angel
    April 30

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    Now this is one very HOT & Steamy poem.... ohhhhh I'm having trouble, lots of trouble. Gosh Mum, you definitely
    should get this one.. wow..

    good luck

    kat


  • Unconscious-Energy gold member
    April 30
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    Bravo.....magnificent....I loved it..well done here...


  • daviscth silver member
    April 30

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    LOL. Oh yea, you got this one sis. I love it. Good luck in the contest.


  • Jonathan Wikkins
    April 30

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    ok, you have my total, undivided attention here!

    i could hear you saying those words to me...
    and my imagine relly got going too!

    good luck in the contest!

    mike, aka jonathan wikkins

  • jcat gold member
    April 30

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    Holy HOTNESS!!!! WHEW!!! I am on fire and I kid you not when I say that I tried to go right through my computer screen and crawl into that bed with him!!! You did a marvelous job seducing the reader!! Best of luck


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 30
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    Go Get um Jules---Good for you---Wrong sex for me


  • unsigned gold member
    April 30

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    Gulp...nice one Sis...

    Bloody hell I have to write on this and I am lost....EEEEEK help!

    S

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