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You Don't Look Back...

  Watching patiently
As you leave
As you walk out the white- framed door
You don't look back
I knew you wouldn't

I hurt you
But forgiveness is essential
In order to have a peaceful world
Is it not?

Why?
Why don't you understand babe?
It wasn't not my fault
I was tempted
You were gone
And I was home alone
Missing the touch of a man's rough hands

Your brother came to help out around the house
I knew he could solve my problem
He could fulfill my need

Sweetheart, you should be happy
I'm able to solve my own problems
Aren't you proud?

I don't get why my apology isn't good enough for you
You don't look back as you leave
But I can't blame you


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okay... this is well...really random

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  • PoetryStar2
    April 30, 2008

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    this is very good and yes when ur bow is gone u do feel lonely and depressed cause they dont call u back


  • paperbackwriter
    April 30, 2008

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    cool i like ur poem reminds me of some of the tings i write bout check out some of my poems and i'll check some of urs out two

  • paperbackwriter
    April 30, 2008
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    cool i love it


  • Fantasy.Dreamer
    April 30, 2008

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    awww...its sad....but, then again, i love it...jeje I mean other than the sadness...

    YOUR POEM IS GREAT

    I LOVE IT

    JEJE...Write more plz