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turned

apple of his eye
young
sweet
soft flesh
delicate skin
ripe

bad apple
old
sour
hardcore
thick skin
rotten






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picture prompt (apple)

A contest entry

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  • Shahrazad
    May 5, 2008
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    Interesting take on the apple theme- the contest wasn't necessarily a picture prompt, the apple pic was just there for fun... but if seems to prompt some cool poems like this one.

    The comparison of the two apples were great. Metaphor to make you think...Thanks for the lovely read.