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Your Fear Of Loneliness And His Greed Have Become The Root Of All Evil

falling down and hitting the ground
but your pain never made a sound
forgotten memories come with the lies
and once more a close friend dies

he is lying to your face
and you'll never even know
once you fall from grace
i wont be able to say i told you so

falling down and hitting the ground
but your pain never made a sound
forgotten memories come with the lies
and once more a close friend dies

sleep doesnt come easy anymore
cause i know you fell back into his allure
nightmares plague my dreams
cause he is not as perfect as he seems

and his money convinces you
that he still cares that he never stopped
but if nothing else i will see this through
you will see it was your heart he dropped

falling down and hitting the ground
but your pain never made a sound
forgotten memories come with the lies
and once more a close friend dies

you went invisible once
my soul was crushed
you ran to a far off land
he followed you even though he was caught
and like i said it was worse than you thought
is this all worth it the lies
the accusations the late nights crying alone
your friends are all he wants
and greed is the root of all evil

falling down and hitting the ground
but your pain never made a sound
forgotten memories come with the lies
and once more i will make sure you wont die
the proof is right in front of you
trust us cause we would never lie to you

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  • Redrusty66
    May 6, 2008

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    Great write. Impactful lines brings across the imagery well. Nice construction and flow. Kept my attention and allowed for individual perspective and interpretation. Enjoyed it greatly. Thanks for the read.


  • thecaptain
    April 30, 2008

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    awesome

    wow what a powerful poem. best line:
    "once more i will make sure you wont die". youre a very strong writer