falling down and hitting the ground
but your pain never made a sound
forgotten memories come with the lies
and once more a close friend dies
he is lying to your face
and you'll never even know
once you fall from grace
i wont be able to say i told you so
falling down and hitting the ground
but your pain never made a sound
forgotten memories come with the lies
and once more a close friend dies
sleep doesnt come easy anymore
cause i know you fell back into his allure
nightmares plague my dreams
cause he is not as perfect as he seems
and his money convinces you
that he still cares that he never stopped
but if nothing else i will see this through
you will see it was your heart he dropped
falling down and hitting the ground
but your pain never made a sound
forgotten memories come with the lies
and once more a close friend dies
you went invisible once
my soul was crushed
you ran to a far off land
he followed you even though he was caught
and like i said it was worse than you thought
is this all worth it the lies
the accusations the late nights crying alone
your friends are all he wants
and greed is the root of all evil
falling down and hitting the ground
but your pain never made a sound
forgotten memories come with the lies
and once more i will make sure you wont die
the proof is right in front of you
trust us cause we would never lie to you
A contest entry
- Asleep In The Arms Of Anger by Redrusty66.
500 points, ended May 6, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great write. Impactful lines brings across the imagery well. Nice construction and flow. Kept my attention and allowed for individual perspective and interpretation. Enjoyed it greatly. Thanks for the read.
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awesome
wow what a powerful poem. best line:
"once more i will make sure you wont die". youre a very strong writer


