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Terza Rima Prayer

Oh Wind that blows, your breath of healing chill
You, from whose unseen presence raises dead
Calm comforter  who speaks in silence still

Meek lowly lamb covered in crimson red
Fierce lion bold and strong, come soon to reign
To whom all shall bow low with fear and dread

We stand in awe to make our request plain
Breathe life into the dead and lost, we cry
Completely wash away our guilty stain

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  • Violinstrings silver member
    May 8, 2008
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    very meaningful

    well written with great imagery


  • stavykm gold member
    May 6, 2008

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    Beautifully Written

    Excellent poem of truth and the realities of life now. Such deep wisdom written so excellently. You did a fabulous job on this poem. I loved the flow and rhythm to this poem. I loved the imagery of Gods word and heart written here and your humble spirit speaks volumes to a fallen world. Thank you for sharing with me my dear sweet friend.
    Many Blessings
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    May 1, 2008

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    beautiful~

    A beautiful poem of faith
    Best of luck in the contest....
    This one is a winner in my book
    Hugs n love
    Susan~~~


  • Samplette gold member
    April 30, 2008

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    I think this is a most wonderfully written piece of poetry. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam


  • michellemybelle gold member
    April 30, 2008

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    Bob, this is so beautiful, full of faith and hope. I actually REALLY needed this, thank you.
    bless you my friend.
    Michelle

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