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Perfect

Your everything i've ever wanted and more,
when we're on the phone neither of us has to say anything and
i'll be content just knowing you're on the other end,
we could talk for hours about nothing but never run out of things to say,
the little things you do and say on purpose or not willalways make my day,
if you follow your heart it will lead you to love,
and this time i know i walked the right path.

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  • Sound of Madness
    July 1, 2008
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    This doesn't meet the line requirements of my contest.


  • Razor-Blade Romance
    June 18, 2008
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    This is such an amazing poem.
    Aww thank you.
    Full of great emotion and love.
    Well Done.


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    May 6, 2008

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    very sweet. i think alot of ppl can relate to this. knowing that they have someone in their corner who truly loves them. well penned.


  • Hate-And-Pain
    May 5, 2008

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    Very well written, a deep and honest piece that provokes the reader to think. A great write indeed, well done


  • LotusRyda
    April 30, 2008
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    this is good i like it

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