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belle
rings belle around
a rolling sound of round
a mold that holds the outpour
of myrrh belle myrrh belle myrrh
belle a round core sound
gold flows myrrh
belle
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A contest entry
- be by ArtFullyMe.
2400 points, ended May 25, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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It's amazing how much the layout gives to this. The long drop from the beginning, forcing the pause in order to take in the string..
and the rounded form of the middle suggesting the motion
It reminds me of a crystal..
a sound I can bring into my mind, and ring..
Thank you for your entry 
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It's the sweetest sound I've heard all day and has the sweet smell of success. Hope you do well in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Beautiful. (How's that for a ringing endorsement?)
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Perfect! You made this look so easy. The concrete form and the phonic ring to the rhyme captured the image of this poem along with the reader's attention. This is wonderful.
Love,
Amera
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With your words you catch the rhythm and sound of the bell, I can hear it ringing. As Poe did with "The Bells," you have done with your poem. And you have done it so very well. Excellent.
Good luck in the contest.
Garrison
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