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I used to be a happy cookie
All young with chocolate spirit
Freshly baked and oreo crunchy
Not breaking the youth spirit
I used to play in the cookie jar
With other cookies like me
On top of the jar, shined like a star
Euphoric, we flee in glee
At the bottom, old cookies stayed
Kept it so crowded and black
Staying mysterious in the shade
So badly I wanted them to crack
But then one day, life wasn’t the same
A bright light crossed the jar
All cookies started screaming in shame
Never was it so bizarre
And later the jar began to shake
It was panic all over
I saw a hand looking like a snake
Removing me with fever
All cookies crying, hiding away
The jar smelled like puking fear
Then I knew it was my chosen day
All I did was shed a tear
I was frozen, ignoring the end
It was too late to react
Now that I’m apart from my friend
The entire world was abstract
And then, THE MOUTH!! IT gotta be it !!
My destination!! My destruction!!
My end!
The end..
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Author notes
nice,eh?
well its not entirely my idea .. Spiffey's story has to do sumthin wid it ..
but yea wutver its a gr8 piece
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Wonderful story, very spiffey
Great imagination from the fallen star
from the cookie jar
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Interesting perspective
well-written and I really liked it 
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holy mother of god!!!
this is my all time favourite write!
AMAZING AMAZING AMAAAAZZZIIINNGG!!!
I loved it!!!!!!!!
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thanks to you, now i have to imagine this everytime i try to eat a cookie. so i'll stop eating cookies. happy now? i'm gonna kill you.
Elie
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this should b attached to every diet prescription then
PS u cant kill me .. coz you leeeeeeuuuve me
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exactly...i love the revolutionnary perspective u give in this one...at some point i felt bad about the sate of being a cookie but then i remembered they're delicious...is there any kind of justice in the food chain ? i guess there would be if a cookie could fight...
love
serge
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well for some reasons, i dont really wanna think about a cookie that can fight back .. wouldnt that b like, biting my tongue or sumthin ?!;p
Thanks dude
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