Websites on computers and friends on line
snuggling with candles and a romantic dine
checking the number when cell phone rings
These are a few of my favorite things
pink colored panties and hot toaster streudels
cinnamon churros and chicken raman noodles
truth uncovers the lie, what a marriage vow brings
These are a few of my favorite things
guys in gray uniforms with huge money stashes
golden rings that stay on my finger without causing rashes
Sparkling clear water that flows into springs
These are a few of my favorite things
When the cow bites
When the alcohol stings
When I'm pissed at dad
I simply remember my favorite things
And then I don't feel so bad
Author notes
this is harder then it looks, allthough i tried to give it my best shot, lol it did turn out kinda funny
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Comments
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nicely penned, it flows well and keeps to the feel and message of the original song. Well done.
Rory
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Nice
I thought it was very cute
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