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Someone once told me

If you endure to the finish
you know you will be saved"

The finish is obviously here
this is the story of the storm we braved.

God will not prevent the storm
but he will help you through it

No matter how much you are suffering
He can make sure you endure it.

We are perplexed,
but not with no way out

we are persecuted,
but not left in the lurch

we are thrown down
but not destroyed.


Always we endure.

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  • Kooks
    May 1, 2008

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    Thank you very much for your entry. The repetition of the idea of endurance is lovely and I love that you worked the title into your poem.

    Good luck with the contest