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~Let me share a few of my favorite things~

Long walks across the oceans sandy shores
Warm Summer fires, and roasting tasty smores
The happiness that summer brings
Let me share a few of my favorite things.

The love of my crazy family and friends
Its easy to find and it never ends.
The laughter that is shared amongst us loudly rings,
Just remembering these moments we share the joy life brings.
(Let me share a few of my favorite things)

When Im feeling lonely.
Sometimes seems like no one understands.
Thankful that someone is always near,
reaching out with loving caring hands.


Friends and family sent from above for us to cherish and love.
Throughout the journey of this life when troubles seem to expand.
Loving hearts are able to lift us up again, helping us to realize that we can stand.

Within a world of sorrow and pain,
Friendship is a gift given to admire to grow and forever REMAIN (gain) (attain)
A precious gift a beautiful promise of love and grace,
guiding us leading us into an eternal heavenly place.
 
Having so much to hold on to thankful for a ray of light shining today
a hope making us strong never to diminish nor fade away.
Walking within this journey were able to learn a meaningful thing or two.
Something special able to make us want to do better to move on to something new!
This is what I have done today hope it means something to you.
Thanks so very much for letting me share a few of my favorite things with you!












Author notes

This was really worth while
hope it makes you smile

Thanks for the inspiration!!
Im sorry if its not easy to understand I need a little help with some things but im still workin on it to.
thanks for your time
~Ocean~

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  • This is truly wonderful

    You are so blessed and have such a wonderful lifestule so many would love to feel and see .Keep up the good work


  • jesusfan01
    May 20

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    the flow was a little hard to follow but other than that it was an amazing write...great emotion
    peace, love, & cheese

  • Ephiphany
    May 7

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    I think you've done quite well in this.

    full of bold imagery, and wonderful expressions in the same. Thank you for sharing, all the best in the contest, sure you will do fine.

    Ephiphany

  • Am unsure what smores are, I shall have to research that. A joyful poem, dancing with emotion and ringing all the bells to say listen,look, all can be well. Good luck in the contest.

    . Rewarded 4


  • Darianna
    May 2

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    This did make me smile, but it doesn't fit with the music. I think the best thing to do when writing to a piece of music, is to sing the words you have written with the music so you can hear how it fits. You do have time to try again if you wish.

    Dari xxx
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