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As I fall asleep

I lay to sleep
at the thought of you
Thinking of what happened today
And what should i do

A deep sleep
Where more i dream
Of all the hardships you brought
That just makes me scream

In a light sleep im in now
Dreaming of good times gone by
When you made me happy
When you made me laugh and cry

I deep sleep again
Of the bad times that brough
Of us making mistakes
The lesson thats tought

I light sleep and about to wake
A decision I make
This is worth it
It's a chance I'll take

I awake with this dream
With my thoughts still there
They haunt me inside
Those thoughts i can bare

You ask me whats wrong
You ask whats on my mind
As i look down sad
Thats when your kind

Will this get better
I hope it will
I stay with you forever
Cause I'm still in love with you

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  • t-w-s
    June 8, 2008
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    lie.. and my arms are tired but all the other poems about me are lies


  • t-w-s
    April 30, 2008
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    check out the new poem i posted


  • t-w-s
    April 30, 2008
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    No matter what dont break my heart and we will be together ok baby, I love you so much