Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

When You Lie Next To Me

When you lie next to me
I can feel your heart beat
I can see what you see
When you lie next to me
My world is complete
My body is weak
My love for you runs so deep
When you lie next to me

You could take my world and change it in a minute
Destroy this life and all that I have in it
You could tear me down
Without a sound
But in your eyes I see
You'd never do that to me

Because when you lie next to me
I can feel your heart beat
I can see what you see
When you lie next to me
My world is complete
My body is weak
My love for you runs so deep
When you lie next to me

Author notes

Its actually a song. And it sounds so much better when I sing it. But I can't sing so I shall spare you the pain

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 8 of 8

  • Gorgeous Nightmare.
    August 11, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Baby

    Its beautiful i like it


  • islekine
    August 11, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    I love it.....it sounds like a song...

    I made up my own melody...I'll spare you also..


  • Dead Star--x
    April 30, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Surah! I ♥ this
    omg youre amazing!

  • Upkeep
    April 30, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    I love it! You are awesome!


  • Run Rhen Run
    April 30, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    aww

    some parts a bit repetetive, but i think its mushy... like cake. ♥


  • lovemedeath
    April 30, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    awwwwwww..... i loved it!!!!!

1 - 8 of 8