name
whispered on lapping waves
of a certain beach
would wrap me
softly
in shipped-off dreams
I am so land-locked
Author notes
springboard from picture provided by contest holder
www.letsgodigital.org/.../75/black-and-white.jpg
In a list
A contest entry
- I won Nighttime angel's PIF (now it's my turn) Come on in and see... by Ephiphany.
400 points, ended May 1, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow!! this was a really powerful write! you really brought a whole new meaning to the prompt! well done! I loved it!
Angel
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ty. If I take a feelign and compact it, such comes out when I set pen to paper.
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Wow, what a powerful expression of longing. Such beautiful expression with economy of words.
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ty, Mallig. Sometimes it crucifies, sometimes I seimply allow the feeling to unwind itself....but always I acknowledge it.
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I have felt this way a time or two... lucky for us the tides always turn...
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Yes, Ithica... to lose some soulful things simply cripples us if we let it...but after the first fling down, one can always rise...perhaps stumbling for a time, perhaps with a limp forever, but rising nonetheless.
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Here you go...sorry system had a glitch and I had to repost.
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This was a wonderful take on the picture
I have listed the Pic credit if you would like to put this in your authors notes. Thank you and good luck in my contest.
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Thank you for the HM and the title credit for the picture.
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