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Bleeding Thoughts

I've lost him.
Why is my heart
bleeding your name,
bleeding from the pain?
Thoughts of love
we gained untouched.

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Option 13. There Goes My Heart

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    July 21, 2008

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    eh don't I know that feeling.
    ahh well... it sometimes feels like hearts are meant to be broken. Or at least mine.


  • Ephiphany
    July 1, 2008
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    Again this is incredible

    loved this. Good luck

    -e

  • Judith Chandler
    June 21, 2008

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    That does fit with the way she might have felt and thought after being rejected and after the murder of her father.

    Nice write. There's a conciseness and simplicity about it that I like.


  • Brazos silver member
    June 4, 2008

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    A thoughtful remembrance of love and pain, wonderfully spoken in just a few short words. Thank you for entering, and good luck in the contest.

    Novy&Brazos


  • Dark Otter
    May 22, 2008

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    Well done!

    I see it got an HM from Ephiphany. It is a romantic poem of loss. Something, that we both share. Keep writing, poetess


  • Angelflower
    May 1, 2008

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    Beautifully written! you brought a whole new look to the prompt and thats a great thing!! you did a great job..

    Angel


  • Ephiphany
    April 30, 2008

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    Wow

    this is absolutely wonderful. Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.

    E

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