Wounding memories, broken promises,
another empty guarantee.
Moments lost, time slipping through my hand.
Lonely teardrops fall in the sand.
Author notes
http://www.letsgodigital.org/.../75/black-and-white.jpg
The writing is my own, I take no credit for this wonderful picture that Ephiphany found that provided the inspiration for my words.
A contest entry
- I won Nighttime angel's PIF (now it's my turn) Come on in and see... by Ephiphany.
400 points, ended May 1, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love this piece, and have felt exactly this way before. *Hugs*
AmBeR
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excellent write as always
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I t looks like success
I like more than mine. Good luck in the contest -
This was a really great piece.. I loved it.. well done!
Angel
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You have truly captured the picture beautifully; the words are deep, meaningful. The concpet embraces the many time you have saw me cry...now I fly! Excellent pen dear daughter and glad you are back....I love you..Ma
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nice write my friend
you captured the picture well
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all I gotta say...thank you and good luck.
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