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Always Will.

I've always loved you.
I always will.
Why does it feel new to you?
I want to be your angel.
The one to catch you when you fall.
When the world has turned it's back on you, I'll be there.
I've always been by your side.
I always will be.
A dark night in hell won't change it.
Cause you're my heart, soul, and world.
Can't you see that?
Wake up, Baby!
Look in my eyes, see the love there.
I've always loved you.
I always will.
Wake up, baby, and see the love.

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  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    August 19, 2009

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    Sometimes love is that simple...just waking the other personup to what is obvious. I know I wish someone could have slapped me silly years ago when I looked past the perfect woman for me. I hope it all worked out well for you.


  • storiesuntold
    August 28, 2008

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    I hear you

    Sometimes we try so ard to get them to do such simple pleasuable things and they act like we just asked them to run the twenty mile marathon . Yet let a couple break up and all that energy they said they didnt have all of a sudden emerges they start combing ther hair and taking a bath . Its not they are looking for love they are just looking for a new maid to wait on them


  • My Heroine .
    May 7, 2008

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    this was an awesome write. sometimes i have a hard time explaiing myself, but i loved this poem alot !!


  • ZombieDisco5150
    April 30, 2008
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    a really awesome write...i kinda feel this is personal too you its a really heart felt poem that has a lot of emotion in it...keep up the great work!!!


    • I will stand by you
      April 30, 2008
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      kinda sorta

      Yeah this kinda does. I wrote it because of a dream I had last night but yeah


      • ZombieDisco5150
        April 30, 2008

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        yeah i think most good poetry comes from dreams one has...i like this piece tho really amazing write!!

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