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In Us All

The life is a series of passing dreams
where nothing is what it seems
everything is a lie
nothing is real
this is life is not mine
i am another
but i do not know who
but when the time comes
my life will end
but until that time comes
i am another
another mind
another breath
another heartbeat
nothing is truly mine
but in the end
it will not be a dream
death is the only way
i can be set free
but how can i do it
i do not know
but have figured something out
something
it is everything
it is the one true truth
the fact of life is that
DEATH IS IN US ALL.

Elle a chaud au cul.

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  • Darkside11
    May 1, 2008

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    very nice flow, it's quite different than your usual style, but it's good to be a little versatile

    keep pennin


  • Desdemona42
    April 30, 2008
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    for a min there it sounded like the matrix