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Tough Love

I don’t know where I’m going
But you will surely see
I’m better off without you
You’re better off without me

Do you want the honest truth?
Because id rather not say
You’re going to crash and burn
This is all not going your way

Don’t apologize
I don’t want to hear it
You’re going to fall apart
Slowly, bit by bit

Have fun at your funeral
I won’t be there
Pain and sadness
Why should I care?

I always cared a bit too much
But I never gave a crap about you
Why would I waste my tears?
I’ve got better things to do

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  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 24, 2008
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    Great poem i loved it alot. My favorite part was when you said "
    Have fun at your funeral
    I won’t be there
    Pain and sadness
    Why should I care?" I can relate to some of the feelings in this. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck
    ..<3..
    Shelly


  • Lio Alexander
    May 8, 2008

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    welcome to allpoetry!!!

    Hello thearmsofsorrow ,

    Great little poem you have here a bit depressing though.

    Good luck with your future poetry

    Lio
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  • xedgelifex951
    April 30, 2008
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    how depressing
    keep your head up don't let
    anything or anyone put u down