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He just left

Deep sorrow
I'm left behind
I still wonder
What was on his mind

He just left
In a hurry
He said he loved me
But he was full of fury

He just left
without saying goodbye
I was lost deep in thought
As I cryed and Cryed

Still wondering
Was it for the best
I guess it was time
For my love to rest

I'm miserable and lonely
But i shouldnt be
He treated me poorly
Thats what i needed to see

So tonight i dream
how would i be today
Would i be happy or sad
I dont truly know if it would fo my way

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  • BenziRae
    April 30, 2008
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    full of furry?
    I think you mean fury
    cuz travis isn't fluffy inside XD

    Good job though


  • t-w-s
    April 30, 2008
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    Wait..so your leaving me. The only reason i left the soccer field yesterday was because of what megan said. I wanted to stay and talk it out with you. But having people tell me Im stupid, and im worthless, i really dont take that well. Because I deal with that at my house already. I love you


  • xXMe17xX
    April 30, 2008
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    www..sos sad i loved the rhym u write well.. its likea little story check mine out x x x