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Letting the Liquid Lead

You nearly cascade to the floor.

I grab at your fleshy bicep.

Those glassy eyes lock into mine.

A ray of recognition returns.

You yank to regain your limb.

The only thing left after your blind pride.

A glimpse of fear crosses those orbs when I refuse.

You're desperate to break free.

An angry beast ensnared in acrylic jaws.

I dig deep before letting you limp away.

Gaging your horror.

Hoping to leave a lasting impression.

What parts do you find to be the weakest?

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