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Falling

What does it mean,
when saying "I like you,"
doesn't mean anything.
How can I say what
you mean to me?
No words can describe
the feelings I have
for you, and how strong
they are for you.
I've fallen so deep
for you, that I can't
get out. I just
keeping falling
deeper everyday.

Author notes

sorry this one sucks, I couldn't get anything together right! I jus can't explain my feelings for him! don't be too hard on me.
Written December 16th, 2003

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  • Morning View
    December 18, 2003
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    This is great, Maddy. It didn't suck at all. (Who's this about..?) I like your poems like this..something other than food. Great job on expressing your emotions!

    Sarah