my
heart
is
in
my
eyes
i
know
she
sees
Author notes
my story
A contest entry
- Live At 10 With Your Finger Tips by theredcatjazzoflove.
850 points, ended April 30, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
thoughts, anyone?
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If your heart is in your eyes, then your eyes must be in your heart, honey!
Good idea!
Kisses...all over!
Galaxy2
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fortune cookie
the eyes are like portals which open to the heart. and your lucky numbers are 5, 18, 34, 55, 83, and 92. chinese word: gung hay fat choy means happy new year.
lol great poem. i liked how it was short, sweet and to the point. keep it up!
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haha...that was cute. thanks.
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This reminds me of Maddy.
(What doesn't these days?)
I really like the simplicity of it.
It's so...
Sweet, I guess.
Almost haunting.
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