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8th Line

The sun on the horizon

slowly tiptoes across the meadows

and begins it's rise upon the day

to set hearts a light and dreams free

solitary moments being captured

under the brightness of a freshness anew

tiny rainbows spill light from left-over dew.

Tiny, little water pixies laugh as they bathe

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Tiny, little water pixies laugh as they bathe

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 30, 2008
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    Thank you for the grace of your line, good luck in the contest