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Demon

Sharp wings,
Dark thoughts,
Black eyes,
No heart.

Bleak face,
Sharp teeth,
Long claws,
An evil trait.

After death,
Its heaven you left,
Scratch marks,
Are what’s left.

Across your stomach,
Across your back,
The devil found you,
Took you back.

Back to hell,
Where you belong,
No choice in it,
Heaven was wrong.

You tried it once,
You tried it twice,
Heaven wouldn’t take you,
You had no life.

You loved her,
She loved you,
She was in heaven,
Away from you.

You couldn’t stand it,
So far away,
Heaven didn’t want you,
She didn’t know why.

You weren’t a bad person,
As far as she knew,
You hid the lies,
The sins anew.

Sharp wings,
Dark thoughts,
Black eyes,
No heart.

Bleak face,
Sharp teeth,
Long claws,
Your evil trait.

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  • Werewolf Avarus
    April 30, 2008

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    ooooohhhhhh... I love it!! great write Tam!!! so dark
    Luv Kate


  • IchiSora
    April 30, 2008

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    good poem babe, kinda evil lol keep up the good work ily xoxo