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The Rocky Route

When tasting that forbidden fruit,

You've stepped upon a rocky route,

Time will tell and time can heal,

Only you know how you truly feel. 

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  • Hey! Gratz on your trophy!


  • Alex Hex
    April 30

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    dear one ,

    four lines of beauty , man this was really nice ! i enjoyed it , its like a robert frost poem " i took the different route hence , and that has made all the difference " .

    great write , best of luck in the contest


  • crazymomma
    April 30

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    Very interesting. The reader is able to take "forbidden fruit" in any way they choose. Nice job. Good luck in the contest