Brittle, I stumble through the cold.
Beauty fades
as I’m left
detached, in this place.
My heartache is
heavy
tears
melting
the
snow.
In a list
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt (PIF).... yep... another!!! lol by kiwigirljacks.
850 points, ended May 1, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - JUST TWO DAYS TO REACH 1000 ENTRIES !!!! ( BE A PART OF THIS RECORD BREAKING CONTEST ) by Alex Hex.
300 points, ended May 1, 2008, 526 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - all HM winners! by Cat10.
850 points, ended May 19, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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thank you for entering! this is a very nice piece! and I always love to see new spacing and what not in poems, shows great uniqueness! you did a nice job with this poem and good luck in the contest!
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Wow....what sad tears...lovely write darl
and congrats on your HM
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Sad indeed, glas it's not real lol
Thanx darl
Cin
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Nicely done. Love the layout gives a visual art sense as well as verbal. Congrats on the Honorable.
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Thank you
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I find it hard to believe that your beauty would fade with the amazing heart of a poet that you have.
Love,
Amera
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Beauty does indeed fade.. and I believe we are all brittle in many ways. Lovely write for the pic.
Thanks for the entry
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Thanks Darl and for the HM, I am honured
Great contest
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Like the lay out of this, adds to its power. Beautifully sad. All the best in the contest with it
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Thank you exaclty what I was goin for beautifully sad
Cindy
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love this poem.the structure is great
E love it.check out my poems x
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Thanks so much, I will do
Cindy
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its amazeing already god sis
love you -
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hehehe awww love u and well the words are here now, so hope there even better
Cin
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