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Destiny

My Friends have gone
The People I know are No more...
The Outside World has changed.
Life has Changed.
Then why am I Still Waiting?

Am I just a person
with no Destiny,no Reason To Live?
Then Why Did it Come to This??

There is something really special for me
I can Feel it.
I can smell the fragrance of it.
It's there in my every Dream.
I can hear The Calling, when I am Alone.

But to get to it
I got to search the Clouds,
as I don't know what it is!
Then Why am I still Waiting?

Its Time to learn.
Its time to Rebuilt.
Its time to prepare,get ready!
no time to Sleep.
The time to enjoy has Gone Away.

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  • Sound of Madness
    June 11, 2008
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    The last stanza is my favorite. It sounds alot like growing up.


  • TwilightBloodRuns
    May 6, 2008
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    Ah, free verse.
    The tool of the true creative mind.
    Love this form.

  • Azka123
    May 4, 2008

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    Not one of but many of us

    It's really hurt when you lose your friends. Many of us accept the reality about the busy ways of our life. May be there's something hidden in you. Check it what's it..


  • AddictingAccident
    April 30, 2008
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    Very nice and optimistic. (The caps were a little distracting, but nothing major) beautiful poem =]


  • The FaeQueen
    April 30, 2008
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    Its very hard to lose a true friend but i love your optimism towards life. its very refreshing!

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