Uplifting clouds surrounding,
wings of elegance
Symboling freedom and purity
Releasing tears of sadness
For what the world has become
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Quickie by SuicidalLover.
450 points, ended April 30, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is good....great imagery in 5 lines...well done..
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The world has indeed become quite a nasty place, but i love how you used the picture, and the figure to symbolize everything thats good in the world. I think its great how you made the contrast =] x
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wow, well written and i love what you did with the prompt. keep it up
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Wow this one is my favorite, I like how you say the rain is tears, beautiful. And the background is my favorite part
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Like...speachless.
:S
Thanks! *ROSE*
~Kystal Angel
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Oh this is nice! welld one.. you did a good job with the prompt hun...
Jetleena
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Great write
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