The sun on the horizon
slowly tiptoes across the meadows
and begins it's rise upon the day
to set hearts a light and dreams free
solitary moments being captured
under the brightness of a freshness anew
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- World Collaboration Poem-Add A Line by 2lullabyhaven.
725 points, ended May 22, 2008, 21 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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a good poem, i like the tiptoes imagery here of the sun setting, taking its time but being considerate to the senses with quiet movement.
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I am so sorry, I don't know how this happened...I remember commenting...anyways, thanks for your addition and sorry about this mix up, it was by no means intended at all...good luck in my contest and please know it was never intendedlol
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