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The sun on the horizon

slowly tiptoes across the meadows

and begins it's rise upon the day

to set hearts a light and dreams free

solitary moments being captured

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  • MotorcycleFreak silver member
    May 3, 2008

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    Beautiful

    This is a very comforting and inspiring piece. Excellent use of word choice for maximum effectiveness. Well Done. ~Peace~Gar


  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 30, 2008
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    Loving this line - thanks and good luck.