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As Intended

Connected, energies
all living entities;
one.

Open eyes,
and hearts see
eternal peace.

Intent forms
pathways
from the
mind.

Knowledge
is
power.


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  • ArtFullyMe gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    As intended, yes, of course that is such a slippery slope, if we are nothing by intent isn't it?

    Love the way this puts knowledge and power on its foot..
    it almost begs to be split yet again, reduced from power to will, in that on the one hand it's freedom and on the other it's the ring around our throat, conceptually speaking at least

    Thank you for your entry.



  • polly filla
    May 2, 2008

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    neat, yet altogether messy

    coincidentally, I read a [simplified] science article from the British Science museum today, about the super-string theory

    mind-blowing stuff, in one elegant sum

    aligning your poetry


  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    May 1, 2008

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    Hi! Succinct, strong, striking and true!

    Very generalised as a self-portrait, I'm thinking... but I much like it!

    Good luck with the contest, Sol


  • aboomer silver member
    April 30, 2008

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    Very well said!! Excellent wording - gets right to the crux with just a few words!
    I like this!!
    best wishes in your contest.