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3rd line

The sun on the horizon

slowly tiptoes across the meadows

and begins it's rise upon the day

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and begins it's rise upon the day

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 30, 2008
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    So far so good, loving all the lines thus far thanks for your entry and good lucklol