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1st line

The sun on the horizon

A contest entry

I've changed the style in this poem, do you think it works?

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 30, 2008
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    And we're off, thanks for your bravery and good lucklol


    • Li snuffles
      May 22, 2008
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      THank you so much for the honourable mntion, the poem was good all together, eh?

      I hope it was what you wanted...

      xxx Lisa

    • Li snuffles
      April 30, 2008
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      thanks i felt kind of bad taht no-one started it yet, although i don't think my line is that great but it gives the second line a more chance to develop about the glowing of teh sun or something like that...xxx