June 19th 2008
Take a few shots of vodka
I’m drunk but can stand
My life is in ruins
Thanks to my bad decisions
Lost love surrounds me all day
Losing my life pal to another girl
Disturbing this young man
Images in my head sicken me
I wish life was easy for people like me
Now my friend is made of metal
My heart found another
Though she had no interest
Tell me by text in a heart felt way
“NO FUCKIN’ WAY ESE”
While they say curiosity killed the cat
For you my dear it was beauty
I’m the beast that will never get my happy “Heather” after
Now I’m really drowsy and nothing will sober me
This is my goodbye not just to you
But to the class
One betrays me so do the rest
I’ve dropped blood for you lot
Now it’s time to repay me back
Mine was spilt by a razor
Yours by my bullet
No I’m not crazy
But my alter-ego is
Meet my reservoir dog
I’m the Mr. Black
You guys are marked with targets
And this is my sick a twisted
Fair ground attraction
There’s only thirty of you
And you can’t hide
Now I’m ready for my final close up
My blood stained mind is now overflowing
I gotta release the flow
Bite my bullet
Like I bit your rejection
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Omg, as other have told you, I'm also in love with your poetry! It's so touching and heartfelt!! If I may ask, do you speak out of experience most of the time? (Your poetry just sounds too real-I love it but if things are really this, I hope you have someone to share these dark patches with...) It's just sad how life is sometimes.....
Wonderful work
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well..er..most of the stuff i write about i have felt first hand but other things are like how i feel so i guess thats the same...if that makes any sense...but i don't really tend to speak to people about my problems as im pretty much a recluse...and i just keep my self to my self...but thanks for your comment again
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...omg...Im in love with ur poetry!
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Damn all the raw emotions in this are strong! Amazing! Keep it up
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a good dark write about a broken heart. keep up the good work
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this is a great write. Keep up the great work
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