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Good Morning/Good Evening

In the East
Where you killed them
You realized that life is ending
We have no words
For our conscience
Languages hear the stars
But do you cheat me
when you feed me
With all those lies?
Perhaps I'd lay down
And cry
Crazy walls pampered in colors
Write the words
Spelling out your name
Oh baby!
Baby!
Do I miss you
Do you miss me?
Will I be yours
For the taking
Am I in the making?
Drinking from the sink
Don't you dare blink
Laughing with the shrink
Can you barely think
So go away
Please stay
Last forever
Or wither like the rose

Please tell me what you think

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  • vampire of thought
    May 1, 2008

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    beautiful poem, and picture. Its so full of imagery, and beauty, and love.

    wonderful, and full of emotion.

    -Twitchy


  • Deathless1
    April 30, 2008

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    you can be mine for the taking. if you want to.
    and i think i might stop drinking out of the sink.
    and i can think unless i'm tired. wich i am.
    so i love you.