Twin 19 year-old blondes exist.
Just down the street.
Sometimes, they alone are real.
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My core self.
A contest entry
- be by ArtFullyMe.
2400 points, ended May 25, 2008, 31 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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you said to read your old poems. here i am
this one is fun. oh I know it's supposed to be "serious" but it's still fun.
the image of 19 years old blonde twins makes me interested...
so what are they up to?
one line and you take it to a whole different place
there's a little bit of regret that the blondes are not "up to" anything
then it's like okay you've had your fun... now think about it.
this was in april and you are not bad here. let me go back some more
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Yes, much said. I too have had the whole of existence become annihilated in such beauty of particularly alluring and promising bliss!
Congratulations to you on your award.
Sol
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LOL...Love it.
So much said..in so few lines.
Congratulations!
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There's not much I can say to that except yep, I think that about covers it... lol
Well done.
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A very interesting piece of thought penned. Honest and raw. Nicely done!
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I actually like this. Your core self...
Lovely. Very honest.
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At least they're legal
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Okay... you completely lost me with this one.
Typically you and I are on the same level, and achieve a certain sort of understanding in our words... but... I will admit that I am just at a loss here.
Can you help me? Please?
LOL!
I do like the fact that this is so mysterious and vague.
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Oh, I like this! I love a short write that's long in thought. Excellent.
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lol....you are so good...
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profound write...humm, checking out my "core"too.
Love this.
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My, my, my ...
the Shrink shrinking himself!
Now tell me: how do you feel about your words? Relax, think of a color, and tell me ... GRIN
Only joking, of course. LOL
I loved this. The reason why is very subjective. This write truly probes the reader to bring to the words his or her own experience ...
Now, my dear Poet, I have this 19 year old who is now 20, and I can tell you this: she is a twin all by herself! Furthermore, if she rolls her eyes, and says, OH my WORD! she alone and ONLY she (and her twin, who on good days placidly smiles!) is real.(They're all out of step, except my son John!) And: under her dark hair, her golden blonde halo is VERY real!
Hahahahahahahahahahaha.
You made me laugh ... Thank you. I loved the way you enticed me, the reader, to respond with MY core self.
I think being able to observe twin behavior, mirror behavior in those close to one, one may become an expert in cinemanalysis ... And understand behavior much better ... and yes ... to experience, is to be real, not so? And: do we relate to the mirror image, or the image itself?
Good luck in the contest.
Myra
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Garrison! This is really intriguing! As a way to describe yourself, I wish I had the perfect interpretation. You'll have to help me out on this one, but I'll tell you what I've pondered.
Twin 19 year olds blondes: Youthful, Beautiful, Naive, Hopeful, Iconic, Fun
Just down the street: Accessible, Familiar
Sometimes, they alone are real: Ironic. Maybe non-sterotypical... and Human
Outstanding and original!!!!
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