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Stately Pleasure Dome...?

There was a Mongolian khan,
Whose ger was as big as a barn;
It would hold at a feast
Twenty score at the least...
Of course, this is a traveller's yarn!

Author notes

Ger - the Mongolian name for the round felt tent, sometimes referred to by the Turkic word "yurt", (There is, or at any rate used to be, a luxuriously equipped one on view in the Horniman museum in London!)

And I assume that most Allpoetry members will appreciate the reference to Coleridge's "Kubla Khan".

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  • piccola silver member
    August 4, 2008

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    I've heard of bigger! This is clever too. Learning more and more about Mongolia. Upper and lower ... thanks for the author notes and for the entry

  • bobby3332321
    May 12, 2008

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    oh

    I don't get the point of this poem but don't feal bad I don't get a lot I don't get a lot of famous poems


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 30, 2008

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    The flap of a ger has no dorlock,
    No flunky to knuckle his forlock;
    But in far Xanadu
    They make much more tadu…
    (Oh damn, here’s a person from Porlock!)

  • ecrivain01
    April 30, 2008

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    Cute ...

    but it's not all that funny. I was hoping for something more humorous than a tentful.

    • Vera Rich
      April 30, 2008
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      Yes, but when you consider how Coleridge dreamed it...

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