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Move on

I thought you were a friend from the start
Before you broke my heart
You may me cry
My heart broke I almost die
I've move on
I've know that our friendship is gone
I look for a brandnew star
No matter how far
No matter how high
I'm ready to fly up to the sky
I don't think of you
I don't want to be blue
I've foound my escape
Without going through redtape
In my mind
I will find
A place for peace
Maybe in Athens, Greece
I will travel east and west
Wherever I go will be the rest
I'll move on
Could be early in the dawn

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  • Room without doors gold member
    August 4, 2008

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    Outstanding

    This reads like a stream of consciousness with subtle rhyme that doesn't detract from the poem and in fact very central to the effect of the poem. I thought this was whimsical and quite dreamy. An interesting poem.