The big things overwhelmed me.
They were just too big.
I dream of
a wife,
a child,
and a home.
I, also dream,
that someday
what I write
will be good enough.
Author notes
A new entry that fits your contest. Thanks for a second chance.
A contest entry
- Fantastic Dreams by broken.inside.xx.
525 points, ended May 9, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Criticize freely, I need input to improve
Comments
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this is beautiful.
simple, yet observant.
great write, and good luck in my contest =]
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