Cupid locked me in a heart
And I can't get away.
This place reverberates my name
Not stopping night or day
And every time he hears my voice,
It starts to beat so fast.
I kind of wish that I could see
Whose chest I'm in at last.
I realize I'm in myself
And inside him as well
I see him almost every day
When I do not, it's hell
He knows I love him because
He's locked inside my heart
He is Cupid's prisoner too
My manly counterpart.
We have been together now
For more than seven years
Ever since I first saw him
His face drowning in tears
We were only children then,
But now Cupid's plan revealed
That in the stars so long ago
Our destiny was sealed.
A contest entry
- Lost In Love*** by SummerlandRayne.
445 points, ended May 5, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Must I smile once more? by Sweetangelgrace.
475 points, ended May 20, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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Brilliant and smooth writing, true and relates to life in an amazing way. love ya work!
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Thank you so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it
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What an interesting and unique piece. I loved the intoxicating used of wordplay. The rhyme scheme was awesome and it just carried me through it like a wondrous song. Enjoyed it very much.
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Thank you The style is one I don't usually use, but it fit the idea that I had rolling around in my head. I'm very glad I went with my muse!
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A deeply romantic write...just "locked in love"!!! Very nice poem on love and it's many spendoured ways! Thank you and best of luck!
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it The romance was easy; my fiancee smothers me in it ^_^
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