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What Part of Heaven.





Waking to the morn
the first bird songs have returned
in branches of the oak tree.

Rolling to see you
under the power of dreams
a slight smile parting your lips

What part of heaven is this?
I want to stay forever!






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  • TheNymph
    May 1
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    glorious!


  • Ithica silver member
    April 30
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    Amen to that!!! *grin*


  • ardentMarch gold member
    April 30
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    I love the title, too.



  • ardentMarch gold member
    April 30
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    Jeff -

    this is a beautiful moment..love this


  • Ladybug
    April 30
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    hot dern fellow, you need to keep rolling on this one!!!

    tis good.

    Tamara


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    April 30
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    Like the way you connected the morning to your love in this aubade--great poem!

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