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[ Little green men ]

Little green men
with big buggy eyes

Men all in black
what a lame disguise

Strange bright lights
fill the night skies

could be an Alien
or maybe fireflies

Can't believe the government
the government lies

land in my back yard
what a really keen surprise

think I'll take em out to dinner
for a burger and some fries

Earthly hospitality
and nobody dies

From the little green men
with the big buggy eyes

Author notes

Yes, I would like to slip a note to the President, it should read: Help, I have been abducted by aliens, they have taken me away in their craft named "The Low rider" they have taken me to a strange planet called "Tijuana" the sneaky little aliens got passed our tight security somehow, they also have been smoking something they call "Chit" they keep offering me a toke on this "Chit" but it smells an awful lot like Marijuana, I will try to keep a grip on my reality and will message you again as soon as the "Low Rider" quits bouncing around at every red light.

An honest citique is well accepted

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  • Simply Simple
    June 11, 2008
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    Nice. That's funny. Amazingly random and very enjoyable. Excellent work. I needed to read something funny. (I just had to go through about a million horribly depressing poems while judging a contest.)

    It's a shame AP only lets us hand out three clappys.


  • Kathryn Bowden
    May 17, 2008
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    too funny! you had me laughing out loud with this one. Thoroughly enjoyable!


  • secberm
    May 3, 2008
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    Took you away in a "low rider"? LOL Write on, poet. One.

    Dez


  • isabelwk
    May 1, 2008
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    hahaha

    Great write! I love the notes after too.


  • Pearl-1
    April 30, 2008
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    if you get abducted may i come to king mark..please pretty please xxx


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 30, 2008

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    LOL---Great wisdom--Great Humor--I believe in Aliens
    My ex-wife was one!!--A Real "Space Cadet"
    Best of luck to you in the contest!!


  • Griswold silver member
    April 29, 2008

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    Ha, very funny, I think I got abducted by that same crew once. I took them to KFC though. Best of luck to you...Scott


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    April 29, 2008
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    Love the poem and the author's note. Lots of fun. Green men with burgers and fries, oh my!


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    April 29, 2008

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    Oh my gosh your such a freakn retard lmao. Ummm I think you should have entered the note as a poem hehe Good luck Deary

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