Oh God
I am sorry
precisely when you eyewitness my rationality
where a quantity of hungers
are lying expecting to be accomplished
what else can I do
when you make such a dazzling globe
and what is wrong when I am lost in it?
though the crux of my lose
in your creation is
that I am definitely crazy for it
yet not eventual
since I am soon-to-be a, your roommate
I know this reality
Oh God
Author notes
Prompt...
Quote 5.
'The flower said, "I wish I was a tree,"
The tree said, "I wish I could be
A different kind of tree,"
The cat wished that it was a bee,
The turtle wished that it could fly
Really high into the sky,
Over rooftops and then dive
Deep into the sea.'
- 'Tree Hugger' Kimya Dawson
A contest entry
- Define reality for me. by Cesarean.
1200 points, ended May 3, 2008, 13 entries
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this is really good
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this is a wonderful composition and i love the fact that so many people still defne themselves through their faith. Thanks a lot and good luck!
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A marveleous piece...
A marveleous piece; one can never rationalize faith and yet as we hunger to have more of Him in our crazy life, we need to recognize and understand our purpose (thus enabling us to align our will with His); another wonderfully composed poem! --Joe
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Excellent
To be his Roommate! That's truly a new thought...but I always expect new thoughts from you. A very profound attmept and a great response to the prompt. Congrats and Best Regards!
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great take on the prompt . love the questioning and the gratitude for the world ... sometimes one feels such desire and hunger for living, especially when one knows about the impermanence of life. thanks.
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To be the grain of sand upon the beach or a dust particle floating upon the air with a grain of salt however minute we feel we should always be more than we are finally realizing we are nothing without God.
You have written another fine piece my friend. Best wishes in life and the contest
Peace in light and love
Noah
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Wonderful!
Dear PDK, this was truly wonderful!
The longer we live the more questions we have
and then finally, I think we surrender!
'what else can I do
when you make such a dazzling globe
and what is wrong
when I am lost in it'
These lines are perfection! Bravo! Jane
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