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The Monkey

There once was a man from down south
Whose inane words bled from his mouth
Yet, for president, he ran
Though not a very bright man
Eight years we gave- then came the doubt 

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Oh America... you amuse me so...

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  • bobby3332321
    May 12, 2008
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    ahh

    President bush many colorful words I would like to say about him good poem

  • ecrivain01
    April 29, 2008
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    Not yet.

    For some reason the damned thing keeps posting double. You need to remove the "the" in front of doubt in the last line.

  • ecrivain01
    April 29, 2008
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    Not yet.

  • ecrivain01
    April 29, 2008

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    Cute ...

    but your meter's a bit off. In the last line, it should be:

    Stole elections twice, now get out.

    I do not believe that man won either in 2000 or 2004. In 2000 the election was stolen for him by the Supreme Court and in 2004 it was stolen for him by the Secretary of State in Ohio.