Crazy wild kids
The cause of pain
Karma will hit them
Like a running train
From smoking in the speedway bathroom
To drinking in the tavern up the road
To getting smashed on the street like a frantic toad
To hell you go you crazy wild kids
Just to think of all the crazy shit you did
A contest entry
- bad kids by Deathless1.
450 points, ended May 8, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow.
that is really good.
i also love the toad part, its pretty sweet.
.shelbie. -
i like it, it is simple but the point is across, and that is what matters. "smashed on the street like a frantic toad" is a very fresh saying that i personaly love. thank you for entering.
great write!
KNIGHT TIME
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