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Eyes on you

Devils watching!
awaiting day, fade dust.
Take heart, blood drain.

A contest entry

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  • peridotPixi
    June 24, 2008

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    i really like your take on the anger prompt, you did a wonderful job with it, keep up the writing, ~Amy


  • Unsigned gold member
    April 29, 2008
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    Gulp....nice a vamp I didn't expect


  • SuicidalLover
    April 29, 2008

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    This is dark.... I like it! I wish you luck and thank you for your sweet comment.
    ~Kystal Angel


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 29, 2008
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    eek!!! chilling take on the prompt.. LOVE it!


  • kitty23
    April 29, 2008

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    wow

    well interesting to say the least

    i didnt really get the point of the conest

    but good luck

    thanky ou for sharing

    keep up the good work



    KITTY

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