If my hands were only yours
Our touch would gently embrace you
Flowing down our lovely contours
Feeling you through and through
If my hands were only yours
I would trace the kiss upon our lips
Sucking the tips of our imagination
Never our fantasies amiss
If my hands were only yours
Our ecstasy will last for eternity
Each orgasmic touch flows through us
Believing in one true certainty
That if you allow my hands to be yours
Your bidding will always be ours
My existence will forever be part of you
While my love I will for ever shower
On you, on us
If you let, only me,
be your hands
Forever
Author notes
just came to me in the Organic market standing next to a woman picking fruit. No it wasn't a phallic symbol
In a list
A contest entry
- Sexy*Sexy Writes by Poetic Butterfly.
600 points, ended May 12, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
be gone for a while, let me know your opnion.
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this is a great poem
you definately have a way with words...can a great poet like u give me advice???? -
Aww! So beautiful that I cried. Sentimental, serene, and so sensual.
The last few lines made me think that, without her, you would die without letting your hands be hers...especially with the word "Forever." Oh, so beautiful!
I need to stand next to someone picking fruit if they can inspire me to write like this.
My opinion: This is wonderful beyond words. Good luck.
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Love the author notes. LOL
Nope, my mind did not think of a banana. LOL
This is beautiful, and sensual, and touching (pun intended). I would check for tense usage in a few lines. Other than that, you have me sweltering when it's already hot (weather wise).
Beauteous work dear friend.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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This is just beautiful, loving, sensual, breathtaking.
It's amazing how the simplest thing can be so inspiring. so much so that it creates a beautiful piece like this.
That flows effortlessy and leaves your reader with a most wonderful feeling after.
This was a pleasure Lovable.
Luv ~sweetness~xx
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Thank U Sweetness. this was such a great inspiration. I love the fact that it bubbled up in me and I was able to at least express it. Thanks for the love
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Just beautiful
This is a very beautiful poem about how different things can attract us to them, as always you have written a wonderful poem, excellent write, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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Thank you darlin - this was a jump out of the blue. I love when they come to me. Appreciate the love
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You have such an intriguing imagination. I'm glad you enjoy sharing it through poetry b/c I enjoy reading it. Keep Writing!
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((smile))
Thanks my friend - Inspiration comes from every where. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. It was a little raw. Thanks for stopping by. I'm trying to get my groove back.
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amazing!
First off all it's good to see some new poetry from you. Second of all, this is excellent writing. The sheer rawness of senualality and love was woven perfectly through out the words. The reader can't help but too see the rich and vivid imagery and feel the emotion hidden the words. Excellent work.
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Thanks bro - I'm trying to get A rhythm going and this was my first spark. Hope U are doing well. I got to get over to check you out. Keep it up bro - and watch out for the tornadoes
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well hello Son, been a long time since I saw you here at your AP home...and you came back with a slamming piece of work. I adore when you just pick the words
from the inspiration in your space where ever it maybe...Hows it going...novy/ Momma
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Hi mom - I missed your contest. This was suppose to be my entry. I'm overworked, booked in 3 locations and trying to stay sane. No stress but my time is getting better and better. Thanks 4 the compliment mom. I'm trying to get my mind right to write. Luv U
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I love when you go beyond
on your writes like that. Very sexy indeed Good luck.
CC
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Thanks sweetie - I'm trying
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